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THAT LAST NIGHT

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 26; the 26th Edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The topic for this month is 'That Last Night'.


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It was snowing heavily,
I was in my car driving happily.
Suddenly, up front a huge tree collapsed,
Realized it as my nerves got synapsed.
To stop, had to apply the breaks rapidly,
Now stuck up in a place, feeling lonely.




All four sides, seemed like jungle,
There was no way out from any angle.
It was dark and couldn't see any thing now,
But realized, harder it started to snow.
Turned off my car,
And, decided to light up my cigar


I was half a doze
So cold that I was half froze.
Suddenly, sound of some men mourn,
was hesitant to see, as I was alone.
Got out of the car and circled round,
But, found no one around.


Sounds increased, I decided to be bold,
Took a long wedge to hold.
Moving forward and deciding to have a look,
I tighten my windcheater hook.
Shocked, as I saw a group of men,
Along side was a laughing group of ugly women.


The men covered me, giving protection,
As women were ready to attack me in all direction.
For my astonishment, they had no legs,
I asked them about the mourns and laughs.
The Women replied with their voice so high,
That they were witches, wanting to kill a lonely handsome guy.


The witches were fighting, who would kill me,
I was afraid and closed my eyes tightly.
With scare I moved aside
Suddenly felt like falling down a slide
With  pain of falling down, sweat and fear I open my eyes bright,
To realize that this was the worst dream of Last Night.



--> Sulaiman Sait. . .
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41 comments:

  1. MAY be dream come true.........take care

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    1. ha ha. . .U think so. . . ?
      any ways thanks for the comment. . .!

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  2. I second something special. How will you react if it happens truly? I always how you rhyme so easily.. :-)

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    1. @Someone is special :-

      1) how Would I react it was true --> Well firstly I would wish that it isn't true and yeah if it was true I would definitely not wanna die in the hands of those witches. . so I would ask those men to protect me a lot stronger. ask their help in lifting the tree that had stopped my path and would sit back in my car and get away till those witches keep fighting. . . . .!

      2) About my Rhyming :- Well rhyming is very important when it comes to poem is what I feel, rhyming gives it a sense that yeah Im reading a poem. . .I do spend a lot of time actually trying to get rhyming words. .and yeah getting rhyming words which do not change the meaning of the message you want to convey is really difficult, though it is a time taking process. . It does pay off in the end. . .

      And once again thanks for the comments

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  3. Awesome poem ra sulai.I was thinking this really happening to you and finally u tell it is a dream . LOL. keep it up . nice

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    1. @Satish :- thanks dude. . .! Yeah it was that final twist that I wanted to give to this poem. . I know ppl will read it with seriousness and finally a twist will make it more interesting. . .

      any ways thanks for the comments. . . !

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  4. whoa nice work :D
    i nevr knw u use cigars

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    1. @luqman :- thanks for the praises

      and yeah I do not smoke cigars. . .!

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  5. must be so glad to know that it was jus a dream... :P

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    1. @anonymous ;- yeah, thank god it was only a dream and wish it remains as a dream which never comes true

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  6. *raises eyebrow* oh really?

    Poem's quirky....... ;D

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    1. @Rashmi :- indeed quirky with a quirky ending. . .
      Thats what I wanted. . .!

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  7. Ur sense of humor is too gud Sulaiman, btw w as it ur real dream?

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    1. @Ananya :- thanks for mentioning about my sense of humor.. and yeah it was actually a real dream. .which happened a few days ago, and shattered my sleep near early morning

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  8. hi. nice one mr. sait. sprinkled with rhyming words. but what i don't get is why witches are described as ugly. guess it s a case of stereotyping. next time describe some beautiful n charming witches. -- dinesh

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    1. @anonymous :- Thankyou. . . Yeah witches are generally ugly. . Long faces with sharp chin, dark color textured face, dark eyebrows, long nose, with a round nose ring. . Pointed ears, a green hood on their head. . Well I remember watching cartoon as Im saying this out on to you.. . but yeah Witches are generally ugly

      I'll try to get good witches next time. . .!

      Thanks for the comment @dinesh!

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  9. Hey. It was a smooth read. Liked it. The end was predictable. I give you points for writing a simple, good, and rhyming poem.

    Personally, I dislike stories/poems where everything's just a dream - I feel cheated :) But that's my personal take. Good luck.

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    1. @kshitij :- Thanks for letting me know that the end was predictable. . Many who read this before were telling it to be a shocking ending. ..!
      May be next time I'll get a better ending. . !

      Thanks for praising my rhyming scheme..
      WEll yeah its completely your take on reading something which ends with a dream, I have nothing to say about it. .

      Any ways thanks for visiting this post and commenting. . . !

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  10. This reminded me of Chuangtzu's dream, where he had dreamt he was a butterfly, happily chirping around flowers. when he woke up, he started brooding, is this a dream,a butterfly is dreaming, to be chuangtzu, or vice versa.
    excellent penning of dream into a poetry. a rare talent.

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    1. @Maun Vision :-Ha ha But I never had Chuangtzu's dream as a plan while writing this. . .LOL

      any ways thanks for praising my talent of penning a dream into a poem. . .!

      Also thanks for the visit and comment

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  11. Some dreams should better remain a dream!!

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    1. @Aativas :- some dreams which come can be remembered for long and for that they deserved to be penned down

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  12. i'll b fascinated 2 c dis dream comin tru ;) never seen witches n ghosts.

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    1. @shreyas :- dude if you want to watch witches and ghosts you will have to visit some other world. . .!

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  13. Nice poem... easy read.. :)

    All the best for BAT!

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  14. haha.. nice one. Some dreams are really funny, and scary...

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    1. @Vikram :- indeed some dreams do scare us. . .!
      any ways thanks for your footprint on my blog

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  15. pretty awesomely rhymed :D \m/

    all d best :D \m/

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    1. @Sankar :- I look to rhyme every poem of mine. . . !
      it gives a poem its beauty . .
      any ways thanks for the comment

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  16. Good that it was a dream :) . Nice poem !!!

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    1. @Lil High :- yeah indeed it was good that it was only a dream . . . . !

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  17. What a dream, really, so scary to think about... A light rhyming poem. Loved reading it. All the best.

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    1. @cherry Blossom :- indeed, quite a scary dream. . . . !
      thanks for the wishes

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  18. Nice way of narrating a story in simple verse form. Makes very easy reading. Best of luck for the contest.

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    1. @The Fool :- thanks for the wishes and yeah when it is kept simple many people do like it and goes for an easy read, , ,

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  19. wow...smart guy...liked the idea of poem...with witches around you...very good

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    1. @Chetan :- thanks. . yeah witches around me. . . .
      ugly witches actually

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  20. Nice poem. All the best for BAT. :)

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