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Just cause of a fight with neighbor brat.
My new apartment was not far away,
Situated right beside the beautiful archway.
With my Bags packed I reach there,
And enter the new home with prayer.
I arrange my room with stress n strain,
And ,handwork didn't go in vain.
It was night, I was glad,
Waiting to rest, after a tough time I've had.
Dawn, woke up to a different light,
Walked out,something beautiful caught my sight.
Standing there, was the girl next door,
In a fancy white dress she wore.
Beautifully expressing the curves on her hips,
With a smile and fullness of red on her lips.
I was shy and couldn't speak,
For I was dressed like a geek.
Every morning, I wake up to the sound of her footstep on the floor,
A feeling which would make my heart Roar.
Everyday on my way back, I cross her door,
Just to have a glimpse of her once more.
Her looks, her beauty, her smile, I adore,
She was definitely mine, I swore.
Never did I ever have that feeling before,
For a beauty who stayed next door.
I couldn't take it any more,
For I was truly in love with the Girl next door.
It was now or never,
If I had to get her forever.
All I had to do was reach out and say "hi"
Even though I was reserved and shy.
Somehow we spoke for a while, then left to dine.
A month later, and then she was completley mine. . .!!
-->Sulaiman Sait
cool bro..loved it.real life story eh??
ReplyDelete@Aaradya :- thanks man. . .!!!
DeleteGlad that you liked it. . !!!
Na it isnt my real life story. . .!!!!
awesome work ! its pretty hard to find phrases ending with rhyming words, but u made it look easy. :)
ReplyDelete@Anirudh :- thanks dude. . .Indeed its quite difficult to rhyme words in a poem. . but rhyming a poem is what makes it special . . . !!!
Deleteany ways thanks for the comments :-)
Wow...Awesome...
ReplyDeleteReally any gal next door ready this...will fall in luv wid u...Axe...Oops sorry...Sulaiman Effect...
:-P
@Naqqash :- thanks bro for the comment. . !!
DeleteActually yeah--> the Sulaiman effect. . Lol
nice one Mr. Sait. really liked it but i was reading with the thought that u should be studying for the exams. :)dinesh
ReplyDelete@anonymous(dinesh):- Indeed I was studying and this suddenly popped on to my mind and I was desperate to pen this down, and thats how this post was created
Deletea girl on the next door,
ReplyDeleteis now inside my heart door!
Beautiful Sulaiman.. Loved the way you rhymed..!
A girl on the next door,
Deleteis now inside my heart door. . .!!!
wah wah. . !!!
I think I missed these lines. . .!!
@SIS :- thanks bro for the comment. . .!!!!
Its just awesomeeeeeeee!!!!!... truly fasinatingg... :D :D
ReplyDelete@Sandheep :- thanks dude for the comment. . . !!!!
DeleteGood poem man ! keep up the good work . Really lovely poem .
ReplyDelete@Khaled :- thanks for the praises and also thanks for the comments. . !!!!
DeleteDoes it have a real-life inspiration behind it? ;D
ReplyDelete@Rashmi :- No no no real life inspiration. . . !!!!
DeleteInteresting narrated with a twisty ending. Did not realize the twist though till I read the comment in the end.
ReplyDelete@The Fool --> Thanks . . The real twist came cause I wanted to end it short. . !!
DeleteThanks for the comment. . !!!
ma ko bolun kya? ;) nice sulai :) romantic dese days uh?? may i kno y? ;)
ReplyDeletema ko mat boolo yaar. . !!
Deleteyeah back to my comfort zone of writing romantic poems. . !!
reason --> no spl reason