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Two Minutes


This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 29; the 29th Edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The topic for this month is 'TWO MINUTES'.

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Just two minutes ago,
Which seems like long ago.
I was with my dream girl,
Since she's left, feels like a fairy-tale gone hurl.


Just two minutes ago, she looked into my eyes
Saw her bow down, filled with shies.
I was now staring at her for a while
untill I was disturbed by a call on my mobile

Just two minutes ago I was with her
Couldnt believe I was  really there with her.?
It looked like a dream come true,
Staring at her I ended up looking like a statue.


Just two minutes ago, she held my hand,
I was dreaming of running away with her to Oakland.
I felt her tender fingers touch mine,
Expecting out future would redefine.


Just two minutes ago, our hands split, and a truck hit her,
Soon there is a pool of blood around her.
A sound of goodbye came out of her heart,
The pain of losing her is now poking me like dart.


--> Sulaiman Sait




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24 comments:

  1. well written... good luck for BAT :)

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    1. @Shashiprakash saini --> Thanks. . !!

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  3. I can't write poetry which is why I wrote something similar in prose :) Best of luck

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    1. @Sandy --> I can't write good prose :) thats why I always prefer poem's - short, sweet and crisp

      Thanks for reading through the post and commenting

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  4. oh my God! I didn't expect the ending like this... Hmm she is dead... :-(

    Someone is Special

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    1. @SIS --> ha ha. . yeah she's dead.:(.. . !!

      Any ways thanks for your comments

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  5. within two minutes...itz superb yaar :)

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    1. @Aparna --> ha ha . . .thanks. . . !!!

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  6. OMG!!! I REALLY FELT YOUR POEM WITH THE HEART..BAD ENDING, BUT IT WAS A TOUCHING POEM........ WELL WRITTEN :)

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    1. @Prithvi Raj sir --> Good that you could feel the essence of this poem, and yeah unfortunate that I had to end it with a bad ending cause that was what I had in my mind. . .!!

      Well thanks for the comments. . !!!

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  7. Very Well written and really sad ending ..

    ATB for BAT if you get time please do check my entry for BAT too.

    Vikas Khair - Two Minutes

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  8. Sad ending ..I liked the poem.

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    1. @aativas -> hmmm. . glad that you like the poem. .!!

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  9. Sentimental to say the least. Good job with this rather deep take.

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    1. @Richi Baidwan -> thanks for reading through the post and commenting. .!!

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