This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 29; the 29th Edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The topic for this month is 'TWO MINUTES'.
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Which seems like long ago.
I was with my dream girl,
Since she's left, feels like a fairy-tale gone hurl.
Just two minutes ago, she looked into my eyes
Saw her bow down, filled with shies.
I was now staring at her for a while
untill I was disturbed by a call on my mobile
Just two minutes ago I was with her
Couldnt believe I was really there with her.?
It looked like a dream come true,
Staring at her I ended up looking like a statue.
Just two minutes ago, she held my hand,
I was dreaming of running away with her to Oakland.
I felt her tender fingers touch mine,
Expecting out future would redefine.
Just two minutes ago, our hands split, and a truck hit her,
Soon there is a pool of blood around her.
A sound of goodbye came out of her heart,
The pain of losing her is now poking me like dart.
--> Sulaiman Sait
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well written... good luck for BAT :)
ReplyDelete@Ash --> thank you. . !!!
Deletenice poem
ReplyDeleteall the best for BAT
@Shashiprakash saini --> Thanks. . !!
DeleteI can't write poetry which is why I wrote something similar in prose :) Best of luck
ReplyDelete@Sandy --> I can't write good prose :) thats why I always prefer poem's - short, sweet and crisp
DeleteThanks for reading through the post and commenting
Nicely written .. :)
ReplyDelete@Anjali Saini --> thanks. . !!!
Deleteoh my God! I didn't expect the ending like this... Hmm she is dead... :-(
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
@SIS --> ha ha. . yeah she's dead.:(.. . !!
DeleteAny ways thanks for your comments
Nicely written. ATB!
ReplyDelete@Rohanabstractedly --> thanks. . !!!
DeleteGreat! ATB! :)
ReplyDelete@JJ --> thanks. . !!
Deletewithin two minutes...itz superb yaar :)
ReplyDelete@Aparna --> ha ha . . .thanks. . . !!!
DeleteOMG!!! I REALLY FELT YOUR POEM WITH THE HEART..BAD ENDING, BUT IT WAS A TOUCHING POEM........ WELL WRITTEN :)
ReplyDelete@Prithvi Raj sir --> Good that you could feel the essence of this poem, and yeah unfortunate that I had to end it with a bad ending cause that was what I had in my mind. . .!!
DeleteWell thanks for the comments. . !!!
Very Well written and really sad ending ..
ReplyDeleteATB for BAT if you get time please do check my entry for BAT too.
Vikas Khair - Two Minutes
@Vikas Khair -> thanks mate. . !!!
DeleteSad ending ..I liked the poem.
ReplyDelete@aativas -> hmmm. . glad that you like the poem. .!!
DeleteSentimental to say the least. Good job with this rather deep take.
ReplyDelete@Richi Baidwan -> thanks for reading through the post and commenting. .!!
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