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THE GIRL WHO LOOKED INTO THE MIRROR (No doubt you look beautiful)

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My first day at college,
with a lonely mind and an empty baggage.
I sit next to a girl,
With a beautiful face and hair so curl.
I look at her in awe,
Unforgettable memory of what I first saw.
She pulls out her compact mirror,
Adjusts her makeup and hair right in order.
Seeing her so delighful,
I say, No doubt you look beautiful.


My first class of the day,
Desperate to focus straightaway.
Midst the class we had our introduction,
And I found her name was Margret Simon.
At the end of the class,
I notice this from my eyeglass,
She pulls out her compact mirror,
Adjusts her  makeup and hair right in order.
Seeing her so delighful,
I say, No doubt you look beautiful.


Now came the mid-day,
I met her outside the cafe'
She spoke about her likes and future,
On wanting to become an actor.
I started to blab
As we were resting near the slab,
She pulls out her compact mirror,
Adjusts her makeup and hair right in order.
Seeing her so delighful,
I say, No doubt you look beautiful.


Finally end of the day,
We leave via the sub-way.
Our conversations in a flow,
Until, she had to take a diversion and go.
I raise my hand to say bye like a moppet,
She too raises her hand, but
She pulls out her compact mirror,
Adjusts her makeup and hair right in order.
Again,Seeing her so delighful,
I say, No doubt you look beautiful.


Next day,awaiting her presence to enlighten my day,
with tonnes of words to day.
Suddenly, news comes from a source,
She has discontinued this course.
I felt, there couldn't be anything more perfect in a place,
Like the beauty she carried on her face.
I missed the way she pulled out her compact mirror,
The way she adjusted her makeup and hair right in order.
She was really so delightful.
No doubt she looked so beautiful.. . !!!


-->Sulaiman Sait

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12 comments:

  1. MirrorGet Sighmon, thats what she is. Well written

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    1. @SirCausticSoda --> yeah thats true - Mirrorget Sighmon should have actually been her name. . !!

      thanks for reading and commenting here. . !!!

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    1. @arihatn Events --> thank you. . !! Glad you liked it and thanks for the comments. . !!!

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  3. Amateur but beautiful all the same. Try not to end sentences so abruptly. Needless to say,i loved it!

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    1. @WildCallipygian - I'll take a note of that , Glad you loved the poem. . !! Thanks for commenting. . !!!

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  4. All of a sudden she left discontinued from the course?? heartbroken... As usual, you rhymed so well and this poem has got so many emotions in it. Keep writing bro.. Looking forward to read your take on IBL...

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    1. @SIS --> yeah. .!! she discontinued the course in a day and the worst thing was that I didnt even get her number. . !!! Thanks for praising my rhyme and emotions. . !! I'm Excited about the IBL. . !!

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  5. Good one.but long one always poems must be short & sweet & shud nt make readers feel lagging with boring

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    1. A five stanza poem isn't actually that long. . ! and when its long I see to that I keep up the readers interest glued on to my work. . !!! any ways thanks for ur comment. . !!1

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  6. the best i liked in all .....ha ha

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    1. @Ridz --> thank you :-)
      glad you liked it :-)

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