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A CRY AGAINST CHILD SEXUAL ABUSE



Walking back home through the boulevard,
I realized some child cry hard.
With etched fear, I decided to see,
What it could actually be.
Peeping through the air vent,
Being able to see to a small distant.
I noticed a girl(barely teen), and a fat man,
Who was likely to be her headman.

I couldn't forget the face of that angelic girl,
Tear filled eyes, yet it silently glittered like pearl.
Hiding there,nothing much I could do,
But empathize, as her master hit her black and blue.
Cries of hunger and pain as she braved through the daylight,
Unable to stop the dirty men, who pounded and raped her every night.
Her innocent heart cried for survival,
For there was no way she could escape from this brothel.

I never knew what her mistake was,
For which she was punished without any pause.
Her cries echoed as she was whipped again and again,
Soon, she puffed out her last breath to relieve herself from the pain.
I sniveled my walk down the lane,
With pain I would never be able to constrain
Only God can now give her peace,
And we, pray and hope for Child sexual abuse to cease.


--> SULAIMAN SAIT.

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51 comments:

  1. prithvi rajDecember 18, 2011 at 8:26 AM

    gudjob :)

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  2. wildcallipygianDecember 18, 2011 at 9:18 AM

    really well written. lovd it.

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  3. sulaiman saitDecember 18, 2011 at 11:21 AM

    @prithvi raj sir:- thanks for going through the post and commenting...!

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  4. sulaiman saitDecember 18, 2011 at 11:22 AM

    @wildcallipygian:- thanks for reading and commenting on this blogpost..!

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  5. Amit GangulyDecember 18, 2011 at 11:30 AM

    Good work indeed!This is essentially a big problem in the society.Keep it up dude!

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  6. sulaiman saitDecember 18, 2011 at 11:31 AM

    @Amit:- yes indeed ur right, its a really devastating problem in the society...!

    Any ways thanks for the comments....

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  7. Aparna parayilDecember 18, 2011 at 12:04 PM

    gudjob dude :) itz a current issue which s persistng n our society

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  8. AnonymousDecember 18, 2011 at 4:30 PM

    very touching.when i was reading itself felt like crying superb......

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  9. sneha maheshDecember 18, 2011 at 9:27 PM

    v. well written sulai. really touching nd emotional. nice to see u write short poem dis Tym

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  10. sulaiman saitDecember 18, 2011 at 9:30 PM

    @aparna :- yeah this is a very serious issue which is persisting in our society and has to bee taken care of...!

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  11. sulaiman saitDecember 18, 2011 at 9:31 PM

    @benazeer:- thanks for reading, I know u told me it was emotional as u read it, I actually wanted to put some feelings into this work, and ways thankyou for the comment on this blogpost.

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  12. sulaiman saitDecember 18, 2011 at 9:32 PM

    @ashwini mam:- yeah it is indeed true, all what we can do is pray...!

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  13. sulaiman saitDecember 18, 2011 at 9:33 PM

    @sneha mahesh:- thank you for the comment, yeah this is one of the shortest poem I have written...!

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  14. NaqqashDecember 18, 2011 at 10:24 PM

    ur too good...awesome....
    :)

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  15. sulaiman saitDecember 18, 2011 at 11:53 PM

    @Naqqash bhaiya:- thankyou for the comment

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  16. Koluthara AswathyDecember 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM

    proud of u boy....appreciable attempt to bring the pain to light...its "you" the Youth of tomorrow who has to bring an end to this...the poem is short yet so deep and it did touch my heart!!!i can feel the pain now!!!

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  17. sulaiman saitDecember 19, 2011 at 12:09 AM

    @Ashwathy mam:- thankyou for the comment... Also very well pointed that we as the youth of tomorrow have to take a step forward with this

    also ur comment(as well as others comment) has made me feel happy as I could touch many people's heart...!

    Thankyou once again for the comment

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  18. Rashmi.TDecember 19, 2011 at 2:30 PM

    @Sulaiman. The poem was well written. I could understand your attempt at bringing out the agony faced by children being abused. I also like the fact that you didn't try to sugar coat your work. you get brownie points for that.

    @everyone else- Call me a vindictively bitter harpy if you will. I don't understand how you could use the word "good" anywhere in or around the topic of Child Abuse, regardless of the fact that were praising the poem not the content.

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  19. Sameeul HaqDecember 19, 2011 at 8:05 PM

    Well said and well attempt.. This shouldn't be paused or stopped without conclusions. Keeping rolling !!

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  20. AnonymousDecember 19, 2011 at 9:20 PM

    nice 1 :) gud 2 c a small 1 as well :)

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  21. pragadishDecember 19, 2011 at 11:34 PM

    super ra sulai. nice touching poetry ra.

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  22. sulaiman saitDecember 20, 2011 at 1:15 AM

    @Rashmi:- Thankyou for the comment...!

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  23. sulaiman saitDecember 20, 2011 at 1:16 AM

    @sameeul Bhaiya:- yes your right... it has to be stopped...! any ways thanks for the comment

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  24. sulaiman saitDecember 20, 2011 at 1:17 AM

    @anonymous-- thankyou

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  25. sulaiman saitDecember 20, 2011 at 1:17 AM

    @pragadish:"- thankyou man for reading and commenting

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  26. Megha SarinDecember 20, 2011 at 1:13 PM

    Oh. It is so sad :(
    Well-written

    Love
    http://www.meghasarin.blogspot.com

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  27. praveen nandanDecember 20, 2011 at 1:55 PM

    there shd be sme ways to stop such inhumane things often left unnoticed and uncared ......... as u said only god can save

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  28. sulaiman saitDecember 26, 2011 at 12:14 AM

    @megha sarin:- indeed sad...thankyou didi for the comment

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  29. sulaiman saitDecember 26, 2011 at 12:17 AM

    @praveen :- yes there should be ways to stop,the govt has to make more stricter rules, but before that people have to realize about the mistake they are doing by spoling the lives of these innocent children...

    yes and indeed we should pray for this(what I mentioned above) to actually happen

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  30. Sarah AdamDecember 26, 2011 at 3:16 PM

    Child Abuse is a growing problem. This poem highlights the dangers and sadness of it. Well done :)

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  31. sulaiman saitDecember 27, 2011 at 12:40 AM

    @sarah:- thanks for the comment....!

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  32. Manjula DattaJanuary 7, 2012 at 9:11 PM

    I wonder............ How can we get rid of the beast within every man

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  33. sulaiman saitJanuary 9, 2012 at 12:19 AM

    @Manjulla Datta Mam--> rightly pointed out its the inner beast which is responsible for getting all wrong things done, I remember a Yoga master, who came only once to our school , he delivered a very important life changing speech... Its the Inner devil which kills you and its this yoga which keeps the devil under control. I still feel yoga is one of the way in which we can control this beast

    Well other ways can be like to think before we act, if we feel one thing is wrong, then whatever it be we shouldn't go for the wrong. A stronger decision is very important

    my personal feeling is if one reads the holy verses of their own religion and detoxifies their self, then no bad thought is gonna come, and no way it will be expressed out

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  34. susheela devarajanJanuary 11, 2012 at 12:19 AM

    very well written sulaiman on this topic of child sexual abuse, i really liked your boldness. proud to say you as my student. hope you get lots of success in future.

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  35. sulaiman saitMarch 23, 2012 at 5:49 PM

    @Susheela mam :- thank you mam. . .! I'll indeed say it is a pleasure to have you as my teacher. . .! thanks for your wishes mam. . .!

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  36. Someone is SpecialMarch 31, 2012 at 2:22 PM

    I hope and wish people stop this sinful sin against child. Ur words always touch my heart. Thanks..

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    1. sulaiman saitApril 1, 2012 at 1:00 AM

      @Someone is special :- thanks for the comment. . .

      yeah indeed people have to stop such a sinful act. . .!

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  37. Romeo YankeeMarch 31, 2012 at 2:25 PM

    very well written sir....really appreciate your work....above rhyming its d truth from the poem .....very well done sir

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    1. sulaiman saitApril 1, 2012 at 1:02 AM

      @Rahul :- Thanks for the praises friend. . .!
      I always concentrate on the rhymings which make this post outstanding. . .!

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  38. Mohamed AliApril 2, 2012 at 11:49 PM

    great work man..

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    1. sulaiman saitApril 3, 2012 at 1:41 AM

      @mohammed Ali :- thank you for leaving your footprint on the post with your comment

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  39. Kritika Jain, Arihant EventsApril 3, 2012 at 1:34 AM

    such people should be just thrown in jail for lifetime...
    well described.. good work :)

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    1. sulaiman saitApril 3, 2012 at 1:42 AM

      @kritika :- indeed such ppl should be thrown into jail for lifetime. . .
      its such a disgusting thing they do. . .!

      thanks for reading this post and commenting. . .

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  40. Srijith GopalakrishnanApril 3, 2012 at 7:09 AM

    well written.. you've brought out the agony fa

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  41. T F CarthickApril 15, 2012 at 8:42 PM

    Heart wrenching poem. Well penned.

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  42. UnknownApril 1, 2013 at 12:28 AM

    well written..... its really gud...:-)

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    1. sulaiman saitApril 1, 2013 at 1:00 AM

      @Sayona Acharya --> Thankyou for reading and commenting :-)

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  43. Deepa IyerApril 1, 2013 at 12:28 PM

    Totally Brilliant. I am amazed at the emotion you have brought out through your words! Well done.

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