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A CRY AGAINST DOMESTIC VIOLENCE

Loud screams and mourns shatter my every night sleep,
Just when my dreams begin going deep.
To the other side of the wall,
A drunken neighbor, strong and tall.
Abusing, smacking and pelting anger on his wife,
Unable to bear the pain, she cries for her life.
She begs him to stop, she literally pleads,
The louder she pleads, the harder she bleeds.
Those cries get louder and louder with each blow,
I'm wondering why's he torturing her so ?
She's mostly locked behind the door,
Always forced to stay indoor.


One tired night, I managed sleeping with ease,
Assuming the couple have settled for peace.
Morning comes and a gathering crowd wakes me up,
Hearing her death news, I start getting hiccup.
She ended her life, committing suicide,
For she couldn't enjoy life as a bride.
I had tears seeing her emaciated and disturbed kids,
who remained mum, like mouth shut with lids.
This is cause, they have seen her suffer,
and her wound become bigger and bigger.
I leave, asking God to protect her tortured soul,
Allow her to reach heaven, an ultimate goal


Domestic violence, Domestic violence till when?
Why do these men show their anger on poor women?
If drinking alcohol is the reason,
Some major action has to be taken.
For, domestic violence hurts and kills,
Families and relationships, stop and stills.
I wish men stop the hitting,
Enjoy life calm and chilling.
For they can see their family smiling
And happiness spreading. . .!


This is a promotional video of Bell Bajao campaign - which is against domestic violence


--> Sulaiman Sait 

38 comments:

  1. HATS OFF TO UR RESPECT FOR WOMEN......NEVER LOOSE IT

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    1. @Anonymous :- thanks. . .I do have respect for women. . .
      For Good women --> High respect
      Bad women--> NO respect. . .!

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  2. Really superb yaar, no words to
    congratulate you....:)

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  3. Awesome.. Vry important thought.. Actions really need to be taken soon..

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    1. @kritika :- yeah indeed its a very importan thought. . .!
      There have been osme set of actions which have already been taken
      like the Ghanti bajao campaign and all
      but our ppl are not ready to change. . .!

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    2. I am seeing the change coming with the education and awareness among the coming generation.. Lets keep working on it till we get the desired outcomes..

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    3. @Kritika :- yeah. . the educated people are much better I say. . .!

      But one thing in the case of educated people is that the domestic violence is from the in-laws. .
      but even that has reduced now I feel. . .!

      any ways thanks for the comments...!

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  4. good one Mr. Sait. nice. time to take action. crime against women is like crime against the nation. should be dealt severely.

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    1. @Dinesh sir :- perfectly said - crime against women is like crime against nation and yeah should be delt severly. . .!

      and yeah thanks for the comments. . .!

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  5. awesome man... dis is d real condition of women in india :(

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    1. thanks man. . .!Indeed this is the real condition of India

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  6. Good work and nice post...
    our cries will not be seen neither heard.

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    1. Thanks for the praises
      I dont understand what makes you say that our cries will not be seen nor heard. . .??

      Some social activities can be done
      LIke for example every one decides to tweet a trend about #DomesticViolence and that too at a perticular time and it trends. . definitely many high level people will look at it. .

      Other way is by having some tollfree number where Ppl can reach

      Its not that this is not gonna be heard
      but it will take time. . .!

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  7. That's one more signature work from you dude.. Keep up the good work...

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    1. @nitin :- thanks man. . .!
      Also thanks for the comment. . .!

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  8. Nice work again Sulaiman..!
    Its really awsm..!!

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    1. @anonymous :- thankyou. . .!
      |also thanks for the comment

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  9. Bhavini jayapradhaMarch 17, 2012 at 8:22 PM

    This is yet another amazing poem from an emerging super poet. Well written sulai.
    You have depicted this social cause in a very good way and it was quite emotional reading this.

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    1. @ Bhavini :- thankyou. . . ! Thanks for the praises and also for the comments. . .!

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  10. bro!!!!! realyyy awesome salute ur respect towrds women but nw a days as i see gals sry to say u but my rspect towrds em is decresing day by day (note: nt all women but nly bad in ny means) !!!!!! nd sulaiman bhai tumra likith baton ko kuch nai keh sakte keeep going !!!!!!

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    1. @Anonymous :- Yeah I do have some respect for women. . !
      Its right to only respect good women. . NO point respecting bad women. . .!

      Dhanyawaad taarif ke liye. . .!

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  11. Hey fabulous poem..especially capturing the death with the rhyming endings.
    Happy to know that there are young guys who are against domestic violence..Keep spreading the word..God bless you..Hope your poem opens many eyes..
    Keep writing!!

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    1. @bhavia :- ha ha thanks for the praises to my rhyming pattern. . .!

      its actually the youth who have to come forward to actually get this kinda social evil out from India. . .

      thanks for your prayers and comments. . .!

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    1. @The PInk ORchid : Indeed true, and really unfortunate. . .!

      any ways thanks for the comments. . !

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  13. Beautiful. Very real and i cud totally feel her pain through.

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    1. @Wild callipygian :- Thanks for the comment.. . and yeah many ppl like u who have read this have mentioned about the feel. . !

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  14. Alcohol is just an excuse for these cowards. Its not what goes into them, its whats already in them. If anyone is to be blamed, blame the way he was brought up. Pity these women though, its high time Indian's start living a practical life!

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    1. @Sircausticsoda :O - Indeed Alcohol is a reason for them. . .!
      Ok he can be blamed the way he was brought up.. but if he tends to drink and hurt her. . then his bringing up is not accounted. . .!

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    2. really it was superb and i dont have words to praise you.i really appreciate ur respect on women.thank u sulaiman.keep it up

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    3. @senthilnathan sir :- thank you for the comment and yeah thanks for reading

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  15. harish srinivasanMarch 25, 2012 at 8:58 AM

    great work sulaiman......if these kind of poems could bring some changes in the society then that will be your biggest acievement . so keep working on more such poems.

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    1. @Harish :- yeah I wish these Kinda poems bring some changes to the society. . It will definitely take some time for it to happen. . .and yeah it will surely be a great achievement. . .!

      thanks buddy for reading and commenting. . .!

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  16. Evocative...you've brought out her plight in an emotionally sensitive manner....

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    1. @Rashmi ;- yeah indeed it is evocative with the words Ive used to portray the image of the woman. . .!

      And yeah Rashmi I have decided to write more about these sensitive matters in the society . . .!

      And finally thanks for the comment. . .!

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