This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 54; the fifty-fourth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.
Silent tears from someone dear, often say there’s something to
fear. It was hard to gain her trust to ponder what her reason for sorrow could
be. Those tear filled eyes rolled, as she painfully cried broad instances from
her past which had no fault of her, but; instead left her with a blackmark
forever
The above post was my first try at writing a 55 fiction. Also, I'm glad that this is my 10th BAT entry and joining other fellow Blog-a-tonic's will be my Mom, who's reasonably new to blogging. You can find her blogpost for BAT here
The fellow Blog-a-Tonics who took part in this Blog-a-Ton and links to their respective posts can be checked here. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. Participation Count: 10
such a sad yet nice little story!
ReplyDeleteShort and sweet post with exellent words describing the silent difficulties faced by women lifelong, that will haunt her forever.
ReplyDeleteNo fault and yet a blackmark that would stay forever! that's a deep mental trauma. Poignant.
ReplyDeleteVery well written with apt choice of words :)
Short and crisp. And it is so true that so many times, we are haunted by our past even if we wish not to be.
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A great attempt with 55 fiction. I like your interpretation of the theme.
ReplyDeleteIt's a very sad story, but the beauty lies in the last line which is left for the reader to understand. Beautiful.
All the very best with BAT54.
Regards,
Megha
Short, complete and honest.. well written.
ReplyDeleteShort and crisp.
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